ged is dead to sparrowhawk :P(no offence)
......... Ged Is Dead partI..........
ged is dead
ged is dead
he got shot in the head
first his body exploded
then his head imploded
ged is dead
ged is dead
he got shot in the head
a wizard took his body
and flushed it down the potty
farmers took his arms
and used them at their farms
artemis fowl took his bowels
and used them as his towels
people from deg
took his legs
ged is dead
ged is dead
he got shot in the head
he sought a ring
but got hit on the head by something
he woke up in jail
and demolished a pail
then a guard came
he said come with me to the torture room
when he arrived he was engulfed in gloom
then he saw a woman at a loom
she said kill the guards and free us all
so he hit the guards and made them fall
ged was shot
ged was shot
his body was left to rot
ged has died
ged has died
his legs and body both got fried
ged is dead
ged is dead
he got shot in the head..................
ged is dead
ged is dead
he got shot in the head
first his body exploded
then his head imploded
ged is dead
ged is dead
he got shot in the head
a wizard took his body
and flushed it down the potty
farmers took his arms
and used them at their farms
artemis fowl took his bowels
and used them as his towels
people from deg
took his legs
ged is dead
ged is dead
he got shot in the head
he sought a ring
but got hit on the head by something
he woke up in jail
and demolished a pail
then a guard came
he said come with me to the torture room
when he arrived he was engulfed in gloom
then he saw a woman at a loom
she said kill the guards and free us all
so he hit the guards and made them fall
ged was shot
ged was shot
his body was left to rot
ged has died
ged has died
his legs and body both got fried
ged is dead
ged is dead
he got shot in the head..................
there two more parts already finished but their not as good as part 1 and i also have others........
ged is dead part two coming soon
ged is dead part two coming soon
Erraten
Ich weiB, die Beschränkteheit der Hyänen
ist bestimmt alles andere klein
Ich will nebenbei nur erwähnen:
Ich red nicht nur Löwenlatein
die stumpfen Visagen betonen
die oberen Etagen sind leer
Ich rede von Königen, von Thronen
und auch Unwissen schützt euch nicht mehr!
seid bereit für die Zeit eures Lebens
seid bereit für den groBten der Coups
die goldene Ära schleicht näher und näher
und was springt uns raus?
Ich lass euch schon nicht aus!
Ihr dämlichen Viecher
der Lohn ist euch sicher
an dem Tag, wenn das recht triumphiert!
und mich endlich von knechtschaft befreit!
Seid bereit!
wir sind bald Untertanen
eines Königs, den jedermann liebt
ich muss jedoch ernsthaft ermahnen
dass es für euch Pflichten noch gibt
die Zukunft gibt soviel zu plündern
das meiste krieg sowieso ich
ich darf trotzdem höflichst erinnern:
kein Krümelchen gibt's ohne mich!!
Seid bereit für den Coup des Jahrhunderts!
Seid bereit für den teuflischsten Packt!
Ich plan es seit Jahren
trotz aller Gefahren
gerissen, verbissen
ganz ohne Gewissen
als König geboren
zum Herrscher erkoren
erglänz ich in all meiner Pracht!
meine Zähne sind blank wie mein Neid!
Seid bereit!!
unsre Zähne sind blank wie sein Neid!
Seid bereit!!
Amwhahahahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaa!!
Ich weiB, die Beschränkteheit der Hyänen
ist bestimmt alles andere klein
Ich will nebenbei nur erwähnen:
Ich red nicht nur Löwenlatein
die stumpfen Visagen betonen
die oberen Etagen sind leer
Ich rede von Königen, von Thronen
und auch Unwissen schützt euch nicht mehr!
seid bereit für die Zeit eures Lebens
seid bereit für den groBten der Coups
die goldene Ära schleicht näher und näher
und was springt uns raus?
Ich lass euch schon nicht aus!
Ihr dämlichen Viecher
der Lohn ist euch sicher
an dem Tag, wenn das recht triumphiert!
und mich endlich von knechtschaft befreit!
Seid bereit!
wir sind bald Untertanen
eines Königs, den jedermann liebt
ich muss jedoch ernsthaft ermahnen
dass es für euch Pflichten noch gibt
die Zukunft gibt soviel zu plündern
das meiste krieg sowieso ich
ich darf trotzdem höflichst erinnern:
kein Krümelchen gibt's ohne mich!!
Seid bereit für den Coup des Jahrhunderts!
Seid bereit für den teuflischsten Packt!
Ich plan es seit Jahren
trotz aller Gefahren
gerissen, verbissen
ganz ohne Gewissen
als König geboren
zum Herrscher erkoren
erglänz ich in all meiner Pracht!
meine Zähne sind blank wie mein Neid!
Seid bereit!!
unsre Zähne sind blank wie sein Neid!
Seid bereit!!
Amwhahahahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaa!!
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wat ru saying?????
i cant understand you
wat ru saying?????
i cant understand you
Reading it, I can sort of hear it as a rap song. I can't picture anybody performing it, though. Fantasy rap, hmmm.
That's "Be prepared" from the Lion King, but then in German.
Well yeah. Mwhahahahahaaa! It's German.
German Finnish English
Said Bereit = Vallan saan = Be prepared
EDIT: Magicman replyed just when I did too.
German Finnish English
Said Bereit = Vallan saan = Be prepared
EDIT: Magicman replyed just when I did too.
I'm sure you wanted to say more than a circle, there.
She was replying to dinkmaster and not you, though. 
Besides, I know she knows German; I doubt that would be much of a concern.
Besides, I know she knows German; I doubt that would be much of a concern.
Hmmm, very violent poem. Not my kind of thing.
Anyway, that Be Prepared MIDI might be useful in a D-MOD. As in, mine. MWAHAHAHAHA!!
Anyway, that Be Prepared MIDI might be useful in a D-MOD. As in, mine. MWAHAHAHAHA!!
It is actually pretty ambitious as a poem.. there are even references to other literary works (Artemis Fowl, although I don't really know what to make of the mention of him ). And it's got a nice varying rhythm as well as a rhyming pattern. Personally, I liked the first half of it better than the latter half. Maybe Part II will be different?
). And it's got a nice varying rhythm as well as a rhyming pattern. Personally, I liked the first half of it better than the latter half. Maybe Part II will be different?
The first few lines can be sung to the tune of "postman pat" quite effectively it seems...
new poem....
called the chaos comet or something like that.....
will be next post.....
60lines or so
i wrote it at like 12:00 midnight just becuz i waz bored.................
called the chaos comet or something like that.....
will be next post.....
60lines or so
i wrote it at like 12:00 midnight just becuz i waz bored.................
...........The Comet Of Doom............
.........1st Verse...........
the comet
the comet draws ever near
the comet all should fear
a red star in the sky
the thing that shall cause all to die
flaming in outer space-
so hot it scorches your face
moving without a sound
movement without any bounds
an omen of death
an omen of fear
an omen of evil that draws ever near
soon chaos will engulf the world
into war and turmoil the world is hurled
soon all truth will come to light
for is there no way to escape this plight?
as the embers of hope die...
the ominous comet looms in the sky
soon all suffering will have ended
for this comet that has been sended
by an unknown force uncomprehended
will destroy all that is here
shattering remaining cheer
doom is immenent for all thats here
for all hope has been lost in a wave of fear
but, amidst all chaos a sage appeared
dispelling all fear
restoring all here
he had a plan to escape this world
at which doom was hurled.......
.......2nd Verse........
but time was lacking
and people slacking
for they had come to accept
their horrible death
as the hour of death draws ever
people work on a ship: powered by fear
endlessly toiling day and night
for this chance at the light of life
soon the end of torture was in sight
they were not about to give up their fight
finally the day has come
the day of which the bards have sung
the ships were readied
by guys named eddy
as the comet peirced
through the atmosphere
the ships escaped
to outer space
the people then saw from their haven in space
their world get destroyed as wouldve their race
the explosion rippled throught the dark space
all at an uneven pace
they drifted through space
for a night and a noon
until they landed on a moon
they named the moon chaos
after what they had been through
a memoir of the comet
that nearly was their doom...........................
.........1st Verse...........
the comet
the comet draws ever near
the comet all should fear
a red star in the sky
the thing that shall cause all to die
flaming in outer space-
so hot it scorches your face
moving without a sound
movement without any bounds
an omen of death
an omen of fear
an omen of evil that draws ever near
soon chaos will engulf the world
into war and turmoil the world is hurled
soon all truth will come to light
for is there no way to escape this plight?
as the embers of hope die...
the ominous comet looms in the sky
soon all suffering will have ended
for this comet that has been sended
by an unknown force uncomprehended
will destroy all that is here
shattering remaining cheer
doom is immenent for all thats here
for all hope has been lost in a wave of fear
but, amidst all chaos a sage appeared
dispelling all fear
restoring all here
he had a plan to escape this world
at which doom was hurled.......
.......2nd Verse........
but time was lacking
and people slacking
for they had come to accept
their horrible death
as the hour of death draws ever
people work on a ship: powered by fear
endlessly toiling day and night
for this chance at the light of life
soon the end of torture was in sight
they were not about to give up their fight
finally the day has come
the day of which the bards have sung
the ships were readied
by guys named eddy
as the comet peirced
through the atmosphere
the ships escaped
to outer space
the people then saw from their haven in space
their world get destroyed as wouldve their race
the explosion rippled throught the dark space
all at an uneven pace
they drifted through space
for a night and a noon
until they landed on a moon
they named the moon chaos
after what they had been through
a memoir of the comet
that nearly was their doom...........................
"the ships were readied
by guys named eddy"
That made me laugh!
Seriously though, I think it's good. I like it!
"the people then saw from their haven in space
their world get destroyed as wouldve their race" Nice.
by guys named eddy"
That made me laugh!
Seriously though, I think it's good. I like it!
"the people then saw from their haven in space
their world get destroyed as wouldve their race" Nice.
thx for the complement
more coming soon.......
definitionm of soon:
some time between 1 day to forever
more coming soon.......
definitionm of soon:
some time between 1 day to forever
It's funny. Poetry-wise it could be better (don't look at me for pointers though), but it's good for a laugh.
Do think of this: a lot of good poetry is usually pretty short. Everything is told in just two or three sentences, sometimes. Power in quality, not quantity, I guess.
But there are plenty of good big poems, so don't worry. It's just that I've seen more good SHORT poetry examples.
Do think of this: a lot of good poetry is usually pretty short. Everything is told in just two or three sentences, sometimes. Power in quality, not quantity, I guess.
But there are plenty of good big poems, so don't worry. It's just that I've seen more good SHORT poetry examples.
September 2nd 2007, 08:45 AM
kk
lololololololololololololololololololololo suck my electric sausage
September 2nd 2007, 08:49 AM
kk
roses are red
violets are blue
sugar i sweet
and
i
suck
lollipoops
violets are blue
sugar i sweet
and
i
suck
lollipoops
I don't know why, but it made me think of the songs by Mystyk Spiral in Daria series... I guess the rhythm is the same. Like this one.
srry icouldnt post ..
its becuz my net went down....
so...
new stufffs coming..
also making new d-mod currently called fyre
its becuz my net went down....
so...
new stufffs coming..
also making new d-mod currently called fyre
>>ad sjálfsögdu<<
Pó enginn sé andlega hlýóinn
Og óvist um gáfnadar hollt
Ég skal tíunda sjónarmidin
Takmark mitt, heidur og stolt
Er ég lit á lafandi tungur
Er ljóst ad pid skiljid ei hót
Hver treystir á taumlausar gungur
Pegar tigid blód stendur i mót!
En nú er ad duga eda drepast
Pessi dagur mun gera okkur fraeg
Nú stundin er runnin
Og örlögin spunnin
Fáum vid einvhern bita?
Pag skaltu vita
Ég veit pad er pvaela
Ad launa ykkur praela
Pegar loks ég saeki minn hlut
Og réttlaetid sigrar í höfn
vidbúin öll!
Pad kaetir ad kóngur sé mildur
sá kóngur mun elskadur heitt
Pid skulud vita ad pad bida ykkur skyldur
Pótt skipulagid verdi breytt
Pid fáid umbun og aeru
Medan ég um stjórnina sé
En hafid pad alveg á taeru!
Án mín hvorki fraegd né fé!!
Verid vidbúin valdaráni
Verid vidbúin blódugri dád
Kaenskuleg hönnun
Polgaedis könnun
Endalaus höfnun
Lidi pvi söfnum
Og vinnum vér krúnu
Og ad pvi búnu
Ég ríki í mörg oúsund ár!
Já, blódid mun lita minn völl
Vidbúin öll!
Já, blódid mun lita völl
Vidbuin Öll!
Pó enginn sé andlega hlýóinn
Og óvist um gáfnadar hollt
Ég skal tíunda sjónarmidin
Takmark mitt, heidur og stolt
Er ég lit á lafandi tungur
Er ljóst ad pid skiljid ei hót
Hver treystir á taumlausar gungur
Pegar tigid blód stendur i mót!
En nú er ad duga eda drepast
Pessi dagur mun gera okkur fraeg
Nú stundin er runnin
Og örlögin spunnin
Fáum vid einvhern bita?
Pag skaltu vita
Ég veit pad er pvaela
Ad launa ykkur praela
Pegar loks ég saeki minn hlut
Og réttlaetid sigrar í höfn
vidbúin öll!
Pad kaetir ad kóngur sé mildur
sá kóngur mun elskadur heitt
Pid skulud vita ad pad bida ykkur skyldur
Pótt skipulagid verdi breytt
Pid fáid umbun og aeru
Medan ég um stjórnina sé
En hafid pad alveg á taeru!
Án mín hvorki fraegd né fé!!
Verid vidbúin valdaráni
Verid vidbúin blódugri dád
Kaenskuleg hönnun
Polgaedis könnun
Endalaus höfnun
Lidi pvi söfnum
Og vinnum vér krúnu
Og ad pvi búnu
Ég ríki í mörg oúsund ár!
Já, blódid mun lita minn völl
Vidbúin öll!
Já, blódid mun lita völl
Vidbuin Öll!
Yay, norse! I understand parts of that, woo.
I thought it was Icelandic. Well, pretty cool. No idea what it says though.
Ah. Well, the Icelandic language is very close to Old Norse. I mean, I wouldn't have made the mistake otherwise. Icelandic and Norwegian was once the same language waaay back in time, btw.
Where'd you get it? What was it about? .. or do you actually speak Icelandic yourself?
