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It is actually pretty ambitious as a poem.. there are even references to other literary works (Artemis Fowl, although I don't really know what to make of the mention of him ). And it's got a nice varying rhythm as well as a rhyming pattern. Personally, I liked the first half of it better than the latter half. Maybe Part II will be different?