The Dink Network

There is a bracket right before your if (&story == 4) statement that is unnecessary. You might also want to double check to see if your &story variable is the right value.

What I usually do is make a key script that will tell me all my variables at any given time. Something like this helps a lot.

//key-80.c "P"
void main ()
{
freeze(1);
choice_start();
"Story is &story"
choice_end();
unfreeze(1);
kill_this_task();
}