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A few grammatical errors... (wouldn't usually point them out, but since you're so pedantic 
) The 'take my leave' comment sounds out of place 'cause the rest of the language isn't in a similar style, and uses contemporary vocab. Would like to see how it develops though... is it going to be scary?
) The 'take my leave' comment sounds out of place 'cause the rest of the language isn't in a similar style, and uses contemporary vocab. Would like to see how it develops though... is it going to be scary?
