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Kyle, the "information" was there just as an example. Of course the writer him/herself can add as much information as he/she likes. I just pointed out what kind of order in sentences and words would be better.
About him being unexperienced as a writer, of course he is. It is good, but something small in the style just gives too much away the feeling of an unexperienced writer. Anyway, forget that. I'm just in a bad mood, so I might pick on the smallest things.
I don't think the name needs to be a complex one, but an original one. Especially the main character's, because you are going to end up typing his name lots of times and if the name is horribly complex, it can get annoying to type it over and over again. A random name that popped into my mind that would feed the purpose: Arthur Terrorwind. Yeah, I suck at coming up names, and I'm still tired.
About him being unexperienced as a writer, of course he is. It is good, but something small in the style just gives too much away the feeling of an unexperienced writer. Anyway, forget that. I'm just in a bad mood, so I might pick on the smallest things.
I don't think the name needs to be a complex one, but an original one. Especially the main character's, because you are going to end up typing his name lots of times and if the name is horribly complex, it can get annoying to type it over and over again. A random name that popped into my mind that would feed the purpose: Arthur Terrorwind. Yeah, I suck at coming up names, and I'm still tired.
