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August 24th 2010, 05:50 PM
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Kyle
Peasant He/Him Belgium
 
Okay I'm gonna try reading parts of it, or all of it, tomorrow. But one thing I immediately noticed, don't change the tense from present to past as was said before, that looks and reads sloppy

More comments after I finish reading^^