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August 24th 2010, 02:50 PM
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ExDeathEvn
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"Skinny Legend" 
A good dialogue example:

Dink approached the shopkeeper with coins in his hand. "How much is that Clawsword?"
The shopkeeper scratched his beard. "Eight Hundie' gold." A quick glance at Dink's palm made him shake his head. "But are ye sure ye have enuf' there, fella?"
"Of course I do..." Dink replied, fishing into his pockets.
"Oh, re'ly?"
"Ya, really..."
"Yer pocket sounds pretty empty to me."
"Oh be quiet." After a moment, Dink's hand emerged and made a chinking plonk sort of noise as more money was dumped onto the counter. "Now gimme that clawsword!"

I think the above is an example of what was meant, right Toast?