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as all of you may know, i started writing a book called 'The Amulet' months (maybe a year) ago, i finished the first draft two, or three, months ago. i re-read it and thought "this is crap! i can do way better!", so i re-wrote it, now i want you to read a small excerpt...
'I was standing in the direct sunlight, making the amulet look like it was glowing. I took a closer look at it, it was round, kinda flat, with a huge gemstone set into it. The stone looked like a cat's eye, surrounded by the strange glyphs. A small breeze blew past me, which was weird, because I was at least twenty below sea level. The amulet seemed to glow brighter and brighter, until I was engulfed by the light, the wind was fiercer then I have ever felt. Then, I was suddenly standing in a small town, I could tell I was in the place in my dreams. The Dragon-looking creatures were everywhere, they were walking around, they were talking to Human beings in a strange language. I screamed, everyone was staring at me, finaly noticing that I appeared out of thin air. A Dragon-creature ran up to me and said something in the foreign language. "Get away from me!"
I screamed, the Creature said something to me, its voice was calm. I didn't know what I was doing, or where I was, i was SO freaked out, that I could see the world spinning, "Leave me... alone..." I said as I fell to the ground...'
this is how Tristan Daniels's adventure begins, the place he was in before he transported to the town, was his archaeologist dad's dig site, a giant hole in the ground many football fields wide, that is all i will tell you. tell me what you think.
-krisknox
'I was standing in the direct sunlight, making the amulet look like it was glowing. I took a closer look at it, it was round, kinda flat, with a huge gemstone set into it. The stone looked like a cat's eye, surrounded by the strange glyphs. A small breeze blew past me, which was weird, because I was at least twenty below sea level. The amulet seemed to glow brighter and brighter, until I was engulfed by the light, the wind was fiercer then I have ever felt. Then, I was suddenly standing in a small town, I could tell I was in the place in my dreams. The Dragon-looking creatures were everywhere, they were walking around, they were talking to Human beings in a strange language. I screamed, everyone was staring at me, finaly noticing that I appeared out of thin air. A Dragon-creature ran up to me and said something in the foreign language. "Get away from me!"
I screamed, the Creature said something to me, its voice was calm. I didn't know what I was doing, or where I was, i was SO freaked out, that I could see the world spinning, "Leave me... alone..." I said as I fell to the ground...'
this is how Tristan Daniels's adventure begins, the place he was in before he transported to the town, was his archaeologist dad's dig site, a giant hole in the ground many football fields wide, that is all i will tell you. tell me what you think.
-krisknox
