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September 18th 2024, 10:03 PM
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I just looked through some of the scripts again for fun...

Honestly, I think nearly every bit of it could use a slight rewrite - one that retains the atmosphere while expanding on the thinner sequences of dialogue. That might take more effort than it's worth, but I think it could be a fun endeavor.

I did notice an instance in which one of the wanderers uses "populous" when the intended word choice is clearly "populace." Barf!!

It's enough to make me wonder if another comprehensive script sweep is worth running by the Robinson cabal. I have better things to be doing with my life, but I've never been known for getting my priorities in order. Lol.