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I really liked the descriptiveness of it and I liked the clunkiness of the introductory bit (maybe a little disjointed...)Yes very dramatic, it groans and like a woman in labour, gasping and resting in turns.
Personally I would be a little careful of using words people don't always know the meanings of, just because it slows the flow of your story if they want to stop and look their meanings up - I have always found it better to use words most people will know well. You reach a bigger audience. (ps I LOVE words) We all know a "dirigible" is a cigar shaped gass bag - just like me ... oh wait HEY!!
I too am waiting to see what you make of this
Dont you get another cat and stop writing it ok
Personally I would be a little careful of using words people don't always know the meanings of, just because it slows the flow of your story if they want to stop and look their meanings up - I have always found it better to use words most people will know well. You reach a bigger audience. (ps I LOVE words) We all know a "dirigible" is a cigar shaped gass bag - just like me ... oh wait HEY!!
I too am waiting to see what you make of this
Dont you get another cat and stop writing it ok 
