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The story clearly shows it has been written by an unexperienced writer. I don't think Kyle's corrections would do it much good either.
Yeah, I know. I'm not much of an expert myself and I'm tired at the moment of writing this. Anyway, I still feel that would do more justice to the sentence.
Also, Jack is a terribly... unoriginal name.
Jack looked toward his, already seventeen year old daughter. She turned her head, not allowing Jack to take a look at her face.
Yeah, I know. I'm not much of an expert myself and I'm tired at the moment of writing this. Anyway, I still feel that would do more justice to the sentence.
Also, Jack is a terribly... unoriginal name.
