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It's okay so far. You need to learn how dialogue works (one line per paragraph), and don't use colloquialisms such as "taking a dump" unless you're writing in the first person.
Either put one space between paragraphs or indent with a tab.
The prologue starts in the present tense, then finishes in the past tense which is kind of weird. It should really be re-written.
Keep working on your writing skills.
Either put one space between paragraphs or indent with a tab.
The prologue starts in the present tense, then finishes in the past tense which is kind of weird. It should really be re-written.
Keep working on your writing skills.
