.............short* stories.............
post any short srories that YOU,the poster made yourself.........
ill post mine in chapters
though i stillhavent decided on a title yet...............
any suggestions posted throughout this topic will be considered.....
also i suk at story writing....
so dont blamme me if you dont like it........
ill post mine in chapters
though i stillhavent decided on a title yet...............
any suggestions posted throughout this topic will be considered.....
also i suk at story writing....
so dont blamme me if you dont like it........
..........................flame..........................
ahem.......
prologue
The year is 2359:The world is engulfed in chaos.
Mankind is in a war caused by an accidental firing
of a disruption cannon toward another country......
................237 years later.................
The war has finally ended.....
All weapons of war stored away.....
Peace reigns throught the land..........
People united by one ruler..........
The supreme overlord.......
................................................
Everyone thought the world had come to eternal peace.....
But they were wrong.....
Soon invasion would be at hand.
The human race fighting desperatly for survival.........
in a war torn land....
................................................
ahem.......
prologue
The year is 2359:The world is engulfed in chaos.
Mankind is in a war caused by an accidental firing
of a disruption cannon toward another country......
................237 years later.................
The war has finally ended.....
All weapons of war stored away.....
Peace reigns throught the land..........
People united by one ruler..........
The supreme overlord.......
................................................
Everyone thought the world had come to eternal peace.....
But they were wrong.....
Soon invasion would be at hand.
The human race fighting desperatly for survival.........
in a war torn land....
................................................
............Ch1 escape............
23 years after the end of the war in a secret military base........
Narrator/prophet:at last the reign of mankind is coming to an end........
fire shall rain from the skies...........
bringing down the last sky scrapers that remain from their foolish war.....
only one hope remains for mankind.....
......the portal.......
"hey!private!,commere",said Evan the commander.
"kay kay...coming..",I said.
This was the worst job ever"i thought"but the commander is worse"
as i approached the commander: a looming figure in the small bunk room we were in.
to be continued.........tomorow
23 years after the end of the war in a secret military base........
Narrator/prophet:at last the reign of mankind is coming to an end........
fire shall rain from the skies...........
bringing down the last sky scrapers that remain from their foolish war.....
only one hope remains for mankind.....
......the portal.......
"hey!private!,commere",said Evan the commander.
"kay kay...coming..",I said.
This was the worst job ever"i thought"but the commander is worse"
as i approached the commander: a looming figure in the small bunk room we were in.
to be continued.........tomorow
Apart from perhaps a few too many full stops, it kind of reminds me of War of the Worlds (the original, not the film).
Hey, that reminds me of another story...
Narrator: In A.D. 2101, war was beginning.
Captain: What happen ?
Mechanic: Somebody set up us the bomb.
Operator: We get signal.
Captain: What !
Operator: Main screen turn on.
Captain: It's you !!
CATS: How are you gentlemen !!
CATS: All your base are belong to us.
CATS: You are on the way to destruction.
Captain: What you say !!
CATS: You have no chance to survive make your time.
CATS: Ha Ha Ha Ha ....
Operator: Captain !! *
Captain: Take off every 'ZIG' !!
Captain: You know what you doing.
Captain: Move 'ZIG'.
Captain: For great justice.
Narrator: In A.D. 2101, war was beginning.
Captain: What happen ?
Mechanic: Somebody set up us the bomb.
Operator: We get signal.
Captain: What !
Operator: Main screen turn on.
Captain: It's you !!
CATS: How are you gentlemen !!
CATS: All your base are belong to us.
CATS: You are on the way to destruction.
Captain: What you say !!
CATS: You have no chance to survive make your time.
CATS: Ha Ha Ha Ha ....
Operator: Captain !! *
Captain: Take off every 'ZIG' !!
Captain: You know what you doing.
Captain: Move 'ZIG'.
Captain: For great justice.
ill post mine in chapters to 1 a day 2 if im in a typeing mood
......I dont know a title........
Chapter-1
The blank
As I stand there stareing down the 30 foot cliff
at my best friends limp lifeless body
in a pole of his own blood I try to think of what the hell just happend.
All I remember is the walk to the cliff after that its all a blur.
Then my thoghts where interupted by the slightest drip to my right side.
As i look down there is a small pudle of blood beside my foot.
(Drip) Did that come from my hand? Am I bleeding?
As i look at my hand their is no cuts on it.
I start to think as I stare at my blood drenched hand. OMG!! WHAT DID I DO!?
......I dont know a title........
Chapter-1
The blank
As I stand there stareing down the 30 foot cliff
at my best friends limp lifeless body
in a pole of his own blood I try to think of what the hell just happend.
All I remember is the walk to the cliff after that its all a blur.
Then my thoghts where interupted by the slightest drip to my right side.
As i look down there is a small pudle of blood beside my foot.
(Drip) Did that come from my hand? Am I bleeding?
As i look at my hand their is no cuts on it.
I start to think as I stare at my blood drenched hand. OMG!! WHAT DID I DO!?
September 4th 2007, 02:30 AM
kk
Dink Smallwood
chapter one
stonebrook
Dink mother called I need you to feed the pigs
What! Now! yes mother replied do it or youll get no supper...
Thats part one of my book...
chapter one
stonebrook
Dink mother called I need you to feed the pigs
What! Now! yes mother replied do it or youll get no supper...
Thats part one of my book...
Did he eat it?
