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My surname is Sir Frederik Madwood. I used to serve under the previous ruler, King Goodheart. I was sent on mission to the scariest missions but i was the only one able to keep my cool.
One of those missions was to the haunted forest of Kwarkness. In it were ghosts that represent the biggest fears known to man, beasts that where so ferocious that Slayers seem like lapdogs, other creatures that could breathe fire so hot that dragon flames feel like icecubes in comparison.
And yet even other beasts had such thick hides that Stone giants seem like paper defense holders. And those were the weaklings.
The first few meters went ok but then those cowards ran away and i was on my own. I only could hear them scream "Good luck Sanity!"
I pressed on, walking in the forest for hours, staying as calm as possible. After I got the item needed, I went back.
When I left the forest, the others went nuts, and started screaming unintelligibly, the only words I could grasp being;
"Sanity! Give back our Sanity!".
The few still sane knights went back with me, at the castle they did the report where I was banished from the kingdom with only my armor and my axe. And the name Sanity.
Now I'm walking the lands and trying to find a place to call home.
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Corrected a lot of it, but there are still a few phrasing errors I couldn't decide how to rephrase.
Also, things in Italics could use revising plot-wise, because of plot-holes and confusion as well as the exact point you're trying to get across.
My surname is Sir Frederik Madwood. I used to serve under the previous ruler, King Goodheart. I was sent on mission to the scariest missions but i was the only one able to keep my cool.
One of those missions was to the haunted forest of Kwarkness. In it were ghosts that represent the biggest fears known to man, beasts that where so ferocious that Slayers seem like lapdogs, other creatures that could breathe fire so hot that dragon flames feel like icecubes in comparison.
And yet even other beasts had such thick hides that Stone giants seem like paper defense holders. And those were the weaklings.
The first few meters went ok but then those cowards ran away and i was on my own. I only could hear them scream "Good luck Sanity!"
I pressed on, walking in the forest for hours, staying as calm as possible. After I got the item needed, I went back.
When I left the forest, the others went nuts, and started screaming unintelligibly, the only words I could grasp being;
"Sanity! Give back our Sanity!".
The few still sane knights went back with me, at the castle they did the report where I was banished from the kingdom with only my armor and my axe. And the name Sanity.
Now I'm walking the lands and trying to find a place to call home.
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Corrected a lot of it, but there are still a few phrasing errors I couldn't decide how to rephrase.
Also, things in Italics could use revising plot-wise, because of plot-holes and confusion as well as the exact point you're trying to get across.
