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need new storyline

November 19th 2004, 09:24 AM
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I've made a decision! As you may know, I've been working on a new d-mod. I like the main concept, ==> a private detective
I've made an intro, titlescreen and you know, some new graphics,... But the storyline is so boring, full of grammatical mistakes, actually it's nonsense, crap, it's more than not good enough,... So, I'm gonna take action and work on a new storyline. Any hints? Let me know, I can use 'em!
November 19th 2004, 01:50 PM
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I'd hope our protagonist is investigating some crime (?) on behalf of an old woman who doesn't have a lot of money.

Also, the main love intersest or detective's best friend must secretly be the villain. Everyone always sees this coming from a mile away, though.

Do those two things, and you're well on your way to a classic (and horribly cliched) detective story.
November 20th 2004, 02:46 AM
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carrie2004
Peasant She/Her Canada
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I like cliched detective stories.
I wonder what crime will be investigated.
Banana thievery?
November 20th 2004, 03:54 AM
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banana thievery would be a possible option, since that is a very grave crime!

I don't know yet, these things need to be thought about!
November 20th 2004, 10:40 PM
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"The dame walked into my office..."etc etc.
November 22nd 2004, 02:49 AM
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carrie2004
Peasant She/Her Canada
*chomp* 
and the dame shows you a newspaper clipping...

BERLIN (Reuters) - Thieves have stolen scantily clad garden gnomes from a gnome peepshow in an eastern German amusement park.

How can dink not help??

November 23rd 2004, 12:48 PM
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Berlin??? wtf? eastern Germany, I don't want no existing country in my d-mod (except for BELGIUM... ) hehe

It's a good tip, but i think i'm gonna pass