Victim of Life
This is Glenn's best so far.
What works:
The story
Funny:
Where the farmer appears and says "Im gonna kidnap per" and then they vanish
Annoying things:
The music
Problems:
The grammar and spelling have not improved.
Dink wont change direction in the start and end.
Some things will re-appear when you leave the screen.
Sometimes dink will not freeze.
People talk with the default (Yellow) voice sometimes
Merlin, maybe "Per" was short for "Perseus" or something
Oh, and one more thing: Try to lay off the F word
What works:
The story
Funny:
Where the farmer appears and says "Im gonna kidnap per" and then they vanish
Annoying things:
The music
Problems:
The grammar and spelling have not improved.
Dink wont change direction in the start and end.
Some things will re-appear when you leave the screen.
Sometimes dink will not freeze.
People talk with the default (Yellow) voice sometimes
Merlin, maybe "Per" was short for "Perseus" or something
Oh, and one more thing: Try to lay off the F word