The Dink Network

I am a single guy who mostly enjoys makeing games and playing them(like dink).
I'm also a programmer that owns the torque game engine, and I am currently, making my own 2d graphics engine in c++.
I am also in a development team that is producing a game called Into the Black.
I am 22 yrs. old.
I live in the United States.

extra300s17@sbcglobal.net
http://www.dustprog.com
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There exists a power beyond the control or desire of any living subjects.
This so called power has been living inside the darkness festering within us,
which some say was why the empress created the dark hourglass.
Through this hourglass was conceived an arbiter,
the watcher and protector of darkness.
The hourglass held magical powers
beyond the limits of what was thought to be possible.
It was thrown into humanity to seek and destroy every living subject in it.
As the hourglass descended upon the ages of time.
Four diamonds were created from it and cast into unknown realms of the world.
These diamonds are protected by cloaked reapers
so no one can try and take them.
The darkness poured out of each diamond and creatures started appearing.
The creatures started terrorizing the land.
Now the time has come for one man to face his destiny,
to become something that sways the darkness
returning light, peace and prosperity back to humanity.
His name is Dink Smallwood.

This is the prologue for my newest dmod I am developing
and before I post it in the preview section I wanted some
input on how it is and if everyone likes it or thinks that
something should be redone or is missing.
I don't want to make crap and have a bad game.