The Dink Network

Victim of Life

December 26th, 2004
1.1
Score : 5.6 fair
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Chaotic
Peasant He/Him
 
This is Glenn's best so far.

What works:
The story

Funny:
Where the farmer appears and says "Im gonna kidnap per" and then they vanish

Annoying things:
The music

Problems:
The grammar and spelling have not improved.
Dink wont change direction in the start and end.
Some things will re-appear when you leave the screen.
Sometimes dink will not freeze.
People talk with the default (Yellow) voice sometimes

Merlin, maybe "Per" was short for "Perseus" or something

Oh, and one more thing: Try to lay off the F word