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Tears of the Devil

The Devil Woman
July 19th, 2007
Score : 5.0 fair
This is not really a review, since there is nothing to write a review on. This is more for the sugestions requested by the author. This sounds like an interesting idea for a plot. The one thing you need to do is run everything through a spelling/grammer checker. In the short intro I noticed at least 10 spelling errors/made up words?