Reply to Re: Addeville Blues (Finished as of 4-8)
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Interesting... the descriptions of the macrabe events was fairly well done.
But, I didn't really feel connected with any of the characters. Hans, Jamie, and Francis all felt extremely... flat. Right now I have no recollection of Hans or Jamie's purpose for being in the mental institution. If you mentioned it, it just didn't stick.
Who is the chainsaw man? Where did he come from? Mental patient? Where'd he get the chainsaw?
The most interesting character was definately the doctor guy. He seemed to be in complete denial over what was happening, which was somewhat amusing.
But, I didn't really feel connected with any of the characters. Hans, Jamie, and Francis all felt extremely... flat. Right now I have no recollection of Hans or Jamie's purpose for being in the mental institution. If you mentioned it, it just didn't stick.
Who is the chainsaw man? Where did he come from? Mental patient? Where'd he get the chainsaw?
The most interesting character was definately the doctor guy. He seemed to be in complete denial over what was happening, which was somewhat amusing.
