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November 7th 2004, 02:50 PM
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Chrispy
Peasant He/Him Canada
I'm a man, but I can change, if I have to.I guess. 
I took the liberty of defining your corrections

I've -- Missing apostrophe
replies -- Pluralization error
[text removed] -- Wordiness
Well -- Capitalization error
I'm -- Missing apostrophe
but I will be -- Sentence Structure
flies -- Pluralization error
a lot -- Colloquialism/Slang
[Editor's comment: Like what?] -- Absent subject
time -- Capitalization error
I -- Ditto
[text removed] -- Colloquialism/Slang (ie. checking 'up' on)
(DSN =.. ..) -- Should be it's own sentence
[Editor's Comment: Time doesn't slow down. It is only your perception] -- [Meta-Editor's Comment: He could be typing that fast. Or, it might also be assumed that he *is* commenting on his perception of time]
Well -- Capitalization error, and there should be a comma after 'Well'.
[text to insert: "at least"] -- inserting 'this time' might also help,

Okay, there are 2 pluralization errors, but I still define them as grammatical errors rather than spelling errors. There are situations where both those words can be used, it's just that that place isn't there.