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It's a good improvement, there's a lot more going on than before in the song's structure.
I still have some comments, though:
You might be having a bit too many crashes, I mean, after every measure? Try to find the moments where it can sound most effective.
You need an "interlude", or "bridge", or whatever you like to call it. Meaning that somewhere in the middle of the song, you completely change the tone height and melody you're working with, and it builds up to make the "regular" melody that comes back after it sound greater. Otherwise it'll just keep going on the same and the same until the song repeats (assuming if one would repeat the song, of course).
EDIT: Oh yeah, you could do more interesting things with the bass notes too, like have them deviate a bit more from the "base tone height".
I still have some comments, though:
You might be having a bit too many crashes, I mean, after every measure? Try to find the moments where it can sound most effective.
You need an "interlude", or "bridge", or whatever you like to call it. Meaning that somewhere in the middle of the song, you completely change the tone height and melody you're working with, and it builds up to make the "regular" melody that comes back after it sound greater. Otherwise it'll just keep going on the same and the same until the song repeats (assuming if one would repeat the song, of course).
EDIT: Oh yeah, you could do more interesting things with the bass notes too, like have them deviate a bit more from the "base tone height".
