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May 11th 2008, 02:28 PM
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Hmm... You have an extra close bracket after the choices and after each result, so I presume none of them are working.

Also, using return is unnecessary because you have nothing other than the choice results anyway. In which case, it would be simpler to do as Rabid suggested and just put unfreeze(1); once, after result 11.

There's a ' after the say_stop in result 2, but it probably isn't causing problems.

You have a { between choice_start and the choices!

Actually, there shouldn't be any close braces immediately after the choice statement. Nothing you choose will do anything. Btw I'm adding things as I see them, so sorry if I get a bit confusing

The guy won't say anything at all if &story != 2...

In result 8: I'm too low on cash. (I know the feeling!)