The Dink Network

The link works fine for me, and Cypry's advice was on point. You need to close your braces. Think of braces like you think of parentheses. If you have a starting parenthesis, you need an ending parenthesis. Further, the way you place the braces matters to what order stuff is run in.

EDIT: A fix of your script

void main( void )
{
if (&story == 0)
{
say_stop("`1You better not edited the C files player.",&current_sprite);
}//you needed this extra brace

if (&story == 1)
{
freeze(1);
say_stop("You were calling me?", 1);
wait(500);
say_stop("`1Yes. It's dinner time.",&current_sprite);
wait(500);
say_stop("Yay! What are we having?", 1);
wait(500);
say_stop("`1Well, I wanted to have duck but we're all out.",&current_sprite);
wait(500);
say_stop("Fine. I'll get the duck.", 1);
wait(500);
say_stop("`1And I'll get the axe.",&current_sprite);
wait(500);
say_stop("Please hurry Dink, it's getting dark...", 1);
wait(500);
&story = 2;
unfreeze(1);
}//this brace was going backwards before

if (&story == 2)
{
say_stop("`1Hurry up and get the duck please Dink.",&current_sprite);
}//you needed this extra brace
//also consider using say instead of say_stop

if (&story == 3)
{
say_stop("`1JUST GET THE DUCK DINK!",&current_sprite);
}//you needed this extra brace
//again, say may be better than say_stop here
//say_stop does funny things when Dink isn't frozen

}//you needed this extra brace...
//...to close out your main procedure

void hit(void)
{
freeze(1);
say_stop("`1DON'T HIT ME!.",&current_sprite);
wait(500);
say_stop("DON'T SHOUT AT ME!", 1);
wait(500);
&story = 3;
unfreeze(1);
}