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You throw in a lot of things that don't seem to really add anything to the story.
I seem to be very good at that. This had less 'things' than Wound, though, right?
His name is not mentioned once in the whole story. Cool.
Eh, it isn't that cool.
Anyway why is the character asking Jake "How Much" when he should be telling Jake the price? Did I miss something?
There is a reason, but you didn't miss anything. My thoughts were he does the university-fleece about once a semester, and only through referrals from the last, mostly to get 'revenge' for being expelled.
I spotted a copy of the DSM IV
Psychology book, basically describes every mental illness, symptoms, etc. Sorry it got you out of the story.
Well best I can say is that it was an ending of sorts.
My attempts were to convey that the narrator was in a state of shock. Losing time, unable to process the words of the real conclusion (which may have been very, very subtle), etc.
I seem to be very good at that. This had less 'things' than Wound, though, right?
His name is not mentioned once in the whole story. Cool.
Eh, it isn't that cool.
Anyway why is the character asking Jake "How Much" when he should be telling Jake the price? Did I miss something?
There is a reason, but you didn't miss anything. My thoughts were he does the university-fleece about once a semester, and only through referrals from the last, mostly to get 'revenge' for being expelled.
I spotted a copy of the DSM IV
Psychology book, basically describes every mental illness, symptoms, etc. Sorry it got you out of the story.
Well best I can say is that it was an ending of sorts.
My attempts were to convey that the narrator was in a state of shock. Losing time, unable to process the words of the real conclusion (which may have been very, very subtle), etc.
