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I am sorry if I sounded pompous. I try to refrain from that image. That is one reason I don't like typing things out to people. Things such as critiques can seem very harsh when meant to be constructive. I meant it all in a helping way. As far as the book goes, I wasn't acusing you of plagiarizing. Sorry if it was taken in that way. Also you must remember I am most likely from a different part of the world then you so things are different. Things that may be overused over here may not be there. I guess that is my fault too. I should have taken that into consideration when reviewing your story. The Theasarus comment wasn't meant to accuse you of not having a limited vocabulary. Look at the statement again...

"(A) Thesaurus will help you with that IF your vocabulary is small."

I said, "If." I don't know you and have never spoken to you in an intellectual conversation, therefore I do not know if you have a varied vocabulary or not. I was just saying if you do then maybe you should seek help. If you do not, then you should just think of other words that could possibly fit into the situation. It just expands the story and makes it read less repetitive like.

I am sorry for any misunderstandings that may have been established through my review and I would like to give you this complimentary smiley to cheer you up.

Good luck on future pieces of literature as well.

Cloudnaeris