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April 11th 2005, 11:47 PM
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I've made some changes to the story, hopefully answering some concerns. In response to how the zombies reached in the car, the window was open (now that I think of it, I should of made it more clear). In response to Winston's face getting torn off, it didn't happen. It says the zombies tried to eat his face. I also liked the way that Dr. Miles was rather clueless to what's going on around him, so added a little bit of that in. It's kind of like a mix between Resident Evil and Half Life .