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April 11th 2005, 10:49 PM
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Aye, I assumed it was supernatural, but I had to first think 'What, I thought Pinochio was on the other side of the room?' and figure out that it wasn't a lapse in continuity, but rather something like teleportation. I guess it would be clearer if you put something like 'but as they drew near Pinocchio suddenly appeared and slammed it shut'. Hmm, that doesn't flow as well as I thought it would.