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April 7th 2005, 03:22 AM
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Scaryyy! I loved Pinocchio when I was a kid. You've twisted and perverted him. I like it!

I don't see anything wrong with this story. A sentence structure not quite right or a slight grammatical error. Not worth mentioning. My stories are full of them. Argg!
The story itself started out strong. The ending seemed a little weak. It's probably just me tho. Everyone to their own.
Thank you for sharing a really neat story with us. I love reading the imagenings of others.
Imagenings?? Ah heck. I'm too tired to look it up. Work in the morning and all. Night.