The Dink Network

Merlin, you're absolutely right about not describing the monster in full and that was on purpose. It's called a 'lead-on' or 'teaser'. But I seemed to have made the reader disappointed instead which is bad juju. But I will give you the next portion later tonight and you will see how I am tying it into the story. That part might or might not work either but we will see.
And Mack will explain the continued shooting to Sarah and his objectives. One question, merlin? You said....
"considering he apparently thinks of everything?"
Is Mack coming across too perfect? He will end up not being as perfect as he has sounded but maybe I should let something slip loose a little earlier than intended?
Mack really does have a surprise for Sarah but I didn't want to unveil too early.
Thanks oh mighty wizard.