Reply to Re: Wrote a horror themed story. Comments?
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December 27th 2011, 12:14 AM
DuckHater
Okay, then give the eyes detail. Add a part where the people bring a woman from their dungeon. Describe the fear in her eyes. Add a part where the people start chanting. Then start cutting her apart as a sacrifice for the eyes. Then add a part where he cannot bear it and runs away. Then comes the scream.
