The Dink Network

That might well be the problem, although it doesn't matter in the example you provided.

Try writing

if (&story == 0)

instead of

if(&story==0)

Also, does the script run at all? If you add

void hit()
{
say("Die unworking mongrel!",1);
}

to the script, does Dink say it when you hit him? If not, it might be a simple typo, or the script might be a SCRIPT.c.txt file instead of a SCRIPT.c file.