poem
Tell me what to do, I'm trying my best, I've tried everything, so tell me what I've missed,
I love you and don't want you hurt anymore...but there's nothing I can do since you ran out the door.
You know I still love you but I'm hurting too, so for the love of our god, tell me what to do...
...to make things better, I wanna save you, let me liberate you, from this pain, so we can be happy again.
The pain of our past, has slit through our wrists, let the blood fall, as we clench our fists.
We drown in our blood, soak in our pain, please god forgive us, we've done it again...
I love you and don't want you hurt anymore...but there's nothing I can do since you ran out the door.
You know I still love you but I'm hurting too, so for the love of our god, tell me what to do...
...to make things better, I wanna save you, let me liberate you, from this pain, so we can be happy again.
The pain of our past, has slit through our wrists, let the blood fall, as we clench our fists.
We drown in our blood, soak in our pain, please god forgive us, we've done it again...
Nice. You wrote it for your girfriend?
Having capitalis and maybe a blank line in the middle would make it look more pleasant, and more people would read it. A clump of text like that looks disheartening.
Bleh, you're lucky I at least separated the lines 
Happy now?
Happy now?
