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poem

December 11th 2003, 07:59 AM
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joshriot
Peasant They/Them United States
keep it real 
i am sitting here, typing in the message
of what i am about to post
as a new topic
and i am now watching the box fill
with this meaningless rhetoric
just trying to fill the void
but alas! tis dangerous
to post such stupid shoot
cause people might not like it
they might say i am some stupid kid
with no usefulness
but do i really give a shoot?
fudge no.
i am high as hell on root beer
December 11th 2003, 02:07 PM
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merlin
Peasant He/Him
 
1) You can't get high on root beer.
2) That didn't rhyme.
December 11th 2003, 10:20 PM
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You can't get high on root beer
oh now we have to be all lrealistic
where's the fun in that?
December 12th 2003, 11:06 AM
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joshriot
Peasant They/Them United States
keep it real 
1. i get high on root beer all the freaking time

2. real poems dont rhyme. that is superficial.
December 12th 2003, 02:24 PM
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merlin
Peasant He/Him
 
1. i get high on root beer all the freaking time

No you don't. You already are high.

2. real poems dont rhyme. that is superficial.

Really now? Also, that was a bad use of the word superficial.
December 12th 2003, 02:26 PM
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Christiaan
Bard They/Them Netherlands
Lazy bum 
you are annoying
December 13th 2003, 02:47 PM
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joshriot
Peasant They/Them United States
keep it real 
its not superficial to worry about making something rhyme, rather than convey a meaning?

i eat poop
its in my soup
come play with my poop
ill give you a big scoop