This is an intro only beta. Any suggestions are welcome.
July 19th, 2007
This is not really a review, since there is nothing to write a review on. This is more for the sugestions requested by the author. This sounds like an interesting idea for a plot. The one thing you need to do is run everything through a spelling/grammer checker. In the short intro I noticed at least 10 spelling errors/made up words?
|anyone beaten !nsane yet?||3||merder||May 19th 2008, 06:56 AM|
|can't get it to run||2||arossow||November 7th 2007, 08:28 AM|