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Heh, I see you kept all pieces of the structure in the same place, you could have copied things over here and there, tried adding some more stuff of your own. My suggestion were, after all, just suggestions, actually parts that you can cut up here and there to spread over the rest over your song.
Still, things are getting a lot better. I agree on it being cut off though. The intro with the fade is awesome.
About percussion... How about using the toms? Like, maybe something like this. And here is another suggestion for the percussion... Of course, don't have the drums playing continuously, but later on in the song, to build tension. You can even leave them away for a later part in the song to have even more tension built - tension is part of the song's goal, after all.
PS. If you need a MIDI of the second percussion suggestion, lemme know. I think it loses its volume changes when I export to MIDI though.
Still, things are getting a lot better. I agree on it being cut off though. The intro with the fade is awesome.
About percussion... How about using the toms? Like, maybe something like this. And here is another suggestion for the percussion... Of course, don't have the drums playing continuously, but later on in the song, to build tension. You can even leave them away for a later part in the song to have even more tension built - tension is part of the song's goal, after all.
PS. If you need a MIDI of the second percussion suggestion, lemme know. I think it loses its volume changes when I export to MIDI though.
