The Dink Network

Decent combination of instruments, the underlying melodies fit the main melody too. However, the biggest problem with this song is the awful repetetiveness - I became bored of the song even before it was half done because the same thing just keeps on repeating and repeating...

Try having a bit more of a structure, like popular songs like to do (verse, verse, refrain, verse, refrain, bridge, (refrain), outro).