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April 24th 2008, 07:53 AM
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soulman
Peasant He/Him Bulgaria
I don't break rules.I bend them. 
Here is a very small part of it in english.What do you think of it?I can post more but first i will need your opinion.Here it is:
The Wizards’ tower in Nevermore – maybe the most inaccessible and at the same time most beautiful place in the whole world. The magicians usually gathered at the tower to look for solutions to important issues. This one looked just like one of the most important ones, as all prominent magicians were present at the tower. - I do not wish to waste my time any more with such insignificant thing! – Tempest, the Lord of the Sky and Aerial forces, finally burst off. - Tempest, enough! You know this problem is on everyone’s tongue lately. Goodness, we are dealing with the Prime Evils here! – Julia, the Queen of Elfish Kind at Nevermore angrily retorted. She possessed stunning beauty and short temper, which rendered her opponents in arguing hesitant and eventually warded them off. But it did not work with Tempest. - Even if the three of them come together against us they do not stand a chance. Of course, there will be casualties, but before long we will triumph. – Tempest said perkily. - Do not overestimate yourself, Tempest! – a hissing voice was heard, and the echo added to the effect. All turned towards the hooded figure at the bottom of the hall. – If you think you’re so great, why don’t you confront Diablo yourself? - Look who spoke up! Maybe it is you who should confront him? Finally we will rid the world of your existence. - Yes I could do it, I could face all three of them… if it wasn’t for my condition. – speaking, the hooded pulled back his hood…..

Do you want to know who is the figure?