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Well, a switch from first to third can be done well, but here it was very abrupt.
I was very attracted to the story - and I'll put this truthfully - until this part. The monster was very random and poorly-described, and it seems out-of-place. I expect it will get better, but that was strange.
I'm still wondering why Mack used his second clip when he saw the first one did no good, considering he apparently thinks of everything?
I was very attracted to the story - and I'll put this truthfully - until this part. The monster was very random and poorly-described, and it seems out-of-place. I expect it will get better, but that was strange.
I'm still wondering why Mack used his second clip when he saw the first one did no good, considering he apparently thinks of everything?
