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"Rudy and Jack were preparing theirself" --- Theirself does not in fact exist in the English language, it's a very common error. Plus, you need a plural form. In this case it would be "themselves".
"they were greet with a horrible sight" --- Greeted by.
"The sky was still covered in somewhat of dark clouds and ash" --- leave out "somewhat of".
There's more, I'll see if I can spend some time on it tonight
"they were greet with a horrible sight" --- Greeted by.
"The sky was still covered in somewhat of dark clouds and ash" --- leave out "somewhat of".
There's more, I'll see if I can spend some time on it tonight
