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Horrible.
Honestly; Censoring out where words should be using symbols and such won't make anyone interested. It explains nothing about how you plan to create a storyline and makes it sound even more cliche.
What you need to do is MUCH better explain what you're talking about. Replace all of those silly symbols which actual words, give us a basic or explained description as to what the words are if they're not from the English we all know today. Is Dink evil or good? We still don't know after reading that. Was it the police or government who kidnapped his sister? Or the Cast, or goblins? Again, you explain nothing. She is that... what? You explain nothing. Chosen? Destined? Cursed? Blessed? Once again, you know what I'm talking about.
What's worse than this? To be honest it's the fact that we haven't got a clue what you're trying to sell us here. A storyline you're planning for a Dmod is the obvious guess because of the Forum-Thread name and the fact that you've posted the thread as Development, but once again, and even I'm getting sick of saying this word: Nothing is really explained.
Hellfire, I'm only ever going to say this to you once. Try to develop your English typing skills a bit more. I don't know or care how old you might be (from what I can tell you're probably a teenager) but on the Internet, not everyone is going to be able to understand what you're saying if you can't make your point clear. If you speak another language as a primary, translate what you're saying and actually say the words out loud and you'll find that you make very little sense grammatically.
I've lost my train of thought, so before I ramble on about the inequities of modern languages I shall click Submit and move on.
Honestly; Censoring out where words should be using symbols and such won't make anyone interested. It explains nothing about how you plan to create a storyline and makes it sound even more cliche.
What you need to do is MUCH better explain what you're talking about. Replace all of those silly symbols which actual words, give us a basic or explained description as to what the words are if they're not from the English we all know today. Is Dink evil or good? We still don't know after reading that. Was it the police or government who kidnapped his sister? Or the Cast, or goblins? Again, you explain nothing. She is that... what? You explain nothing. Chosen? Destined? Cursed? Blessed? Once again, you know what I'm talking about.
What's worse than this? To be honest it's the fact that we haven't got a clue what you're trying to sell us here. A storyline you're planning for a Dmod is the obvious guess because of the Forum-Thread name and the fact that you've posted the thread as Development, but once again, and even I'm getting sick of saying this word: Nothing is really explained.
Hellfire, I'm only ever going to say this to you once. Try to develop your English typing skills a bit more. I don't know or care how old you might be (from what I can tell you're probably a teenager) but on the Internet, not everyone is going to be able to understand what you're saying if you can't make your point clear. If you speak another language as a primary, translate what you're saying and actually say the words out loud and you'll find that you make very little sense grammatically.
I've lost my train of thought, so before I ramble on about the inequities of modern languages I shall click Submit and move on.
