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midi midi mayhem

March 8th 2004, 07:45 PM
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joshriot
Peasant They/Them United States
keep it real 
jelly midi

been a while since ive released any of my stupid music. any comments? i already have two parts in mind i wish to alter.
March 8th 2004, 08:01 PM
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redink1
King He/Him United States bloop
A mother ducking wizard 
Beware: I couldn't critique music out of a wet paper bag trapped in a mouse trap.

Its ok. The beginning sounds a bit too 'circus-y'. And the pause in the middle just feels out of place. Overall it just feels too repetitive, in a bad way.

Its no 'been shot down', which I really, really like.
March 8th 2004, 09:31 PM
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joshriot
Peasant They/Them United States
keep it real 
"been shot down" is a remake of a song my very first band played called "overkill." i renamed it because there is a cool part in the song that goes "ive been shot down" and "overkill" is the name of a shootty band.

this was like 4 years ago, and the name of the band was "TFH" (the fudge heads) we played "runaway" too, which i have in that midi pack.

i have mp3s for both, but besides the vocals... they both suck.
March 8th 2004, 09:55 PM
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Striker
Noble She/Her United States
Daniel, there are clowns. 
Hmm... I actually kind of like this. While the repetitiveness isn't necessarily a bad thing, the song does feel like it needs more instrumental variety to offset it. Like having the piano come in earlier, since I really enjoyed that part.

While the pause doesn't work in midi format, I think it would work in the audio version.
March 9th 2004, 08:13 AM
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joshriot
Peasant They/Them United States
keep it real 
crap! 10 people are on right now.

that song needs too many changes. its depressing me right now.

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i do realize that this is totally screwed up near the end. not finished.