The Dink Network

Quest for Food (The)

October 20th, 2003
1.1
Score : 5.3 fair
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namh666
Peasant He/Him United States
 
A short d-mod about dink running out of food.

This is a major improvment in his d-mod and has an existing plot.

Good
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Glenn is improving his ability to create a dmod.
This dmod has a good plot.

Badd
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Waaaaaaay to short.
Hardness errors galore.
Minor spelling errors.
Few screenlock bugs.

An overall improved d-mod.
Keep up the effort!