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May 5th 2006, 03:36 PM
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Peasant They/Them Netherlands duck
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I'd put the conversation on separate lines. Like this:

(Ashley) Me! Ashley! What's your name!?
(Austin) Austin...What do you want?
(Ashley) I want to help you!
(Austin) Really!?! I could use the help...where should we start?

etc...

This improves readability very much.