Reply to Re: Lost Crystals (Fiction) Chapter 1.2
If you don't have an account, just leave the password field blank.
I'd put the conversation on separate lines. Like this:
(Ashley) Me! Ashley! What's your name!?
(Austin) Austin...What do you want?
(Ashley) I want to help you!
(Austin) Really!?! I could use the help...where should we start?
etc...
This improves readability very much.
(Ashley) Me! Ashley! What's your name!?
(Austin) Austin...What do you want?
(Ashley) I want to help you!
(Austin) Really!?! I could use the help...where should we start?
etc...
This improves readability very much.