The Dink Network

You don't need the &story checks within the &result checks, but they shouldn't be causing the problem. Next up, I still see the void main( void ). Get rid of it. You shouldn't nest two procedures (things like void main( void ), void talk( void ), etc). In your case, the talk procedure (void talk( void )) is inside the main procedure (void main( void )).

By the way, what is

unfreeze(1);
&story = 1;

doing between result 3 and 4?

Meh, except for those things, I see no real scripting error just now.