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Well it seems like my story was found out then, how did you guys like how I wrote it? I'll try and write a new story real quick, it should hopefully be fully made up, but I can't guarantee that I have any inspirations.
In the town of Eithcan, there was a tight knit community that welcomed all travellers, even those that seemed in a rough shape and managed to be friendly to all of the surrounding wild life, and with it was a family of wolves that everyone knew. Every month the wolves would either start howling or play with the children of the town, it was always peaceful then. But one month went by and there wasn't a sign of the wolves at all, no one reacted too much due to the thought of, 'Maybe the wolves have to rest now' or how, 'Maybe one of them is sick'. After a couple of months, people started to worry, not because of the wolves though, but because of a high amount of children disappearing. After 3 kids disappeared in one month, people started to organize neighbourhood watches and decided to search the forests. Most searches didn't turn out so well, some people got lost, some people seemed to be different, and some just felt some kind of bad feeling. Finally after weeks of looking, one group found an outcropping, it contained some bones, sticking out of the ground, there weren't any skulls to identify what they were, but from the count and size, it seemed like it was the lost children. After investigating the area a little more, they stumbled upon a cave nearby, deep inside were the bodies of the wolf pack, there also seemed to be a child's body next to them with some paper with some scribblings and drawings. From what the paper said, it seemed like the children regarded the wolves as a family and how they went out to look for them when they felt something wasn't right, it seemed like none of them wanted to believe what happened, so they stayed and tried to make the wolves better, until some dark figure came and did something.
How do you guys think this piece is, I had a tough time managing to keep it all together and think it may be a little low on detail or so.
In the town of Eithcan, there was a tight knit community that welcomed all travellers, even those that seemed in a rough shape and managed to be friendly to all of the surrounding wild life, and with it was a family of wolves that everyone knew. Every month the wolves would either start howling or play with the children of the town, it was always peaceful then. But one month went by and there wasn't a sign of the wolves at all, no one reacted too much due to the thought of, 'Maybe the wolves have to rest now' or how, 'Maybe one of them is sick'. After a couple of months, people started to worry, not because of the wolves though, but because of a high amount of children disappearing. After 3 kids disappeared in one month, people started to organize neighbourhood watches and decided to search the forests. Most searches didn't turn out so well, some people got lost, some people seemed to be different, and some just felt some kind of bad feeling. Finally after weeks of looking, one group found an outcropping, it contained some bones, sticking out of the ground, there weren't any skulls to identify what they were, but from the count and size, it seemed like it was the lost children. After investigating the area a little more, they stumbled upon a cave nearby, deep inside were the bodies of the wolf pack, there also seemed to be a child's body next to them with some paper with some scribblings and drawings. From what the paper said, it seemed like the children regarded the wolves as a family and how they went out to look for them when they felt something wasn't right, it seemed like none of them wanted to believe what happened, so they stayed and tried to make the wolves better, until some dark figure came and did something.
How do you guys think this piece is, I had a tough time managing to keep it all together and think it may be a little low on detail or so.
