The Dink Network

Ok, I know there are many people here that are more knowledge than me in the english language, because, well you live in an English-speaking country. I'd like to reach out to those of you for some help.

I would like you to read this following text and point out spelling mistakes, bad grammar, and sentences that could be formulated in a better way (without making it longer).

This is Hover Droid.

It’s up to you to keep him on the screen for as long as possible so that he doesn’t get lost in the 
endless emptyness of space. 

To control Hover Droid, simply hold the side of the screen you want him to move towads with your thumb.

To help you there are two kinds of bonuses for you to collect.

			This will give you 5 points
			
			This will slow down the 	 
			speed of the platforms,
 			making it easier for 
			Hover Droid to survive.

Good luck, and happy Hovering!