Reply to Re: Wild ARMs second book
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The content and writing style are fine, but the spelling and grammar needs work. But I think you're already aware of that. All you can do is keep improving your English until you get really good at it. The best way to work at that is by reading other books, as many as possible.
In any case, it was a nice read for the story
I think you might want to try to end chapters with foreshadowing to the next or by buildig tension, or a cliffhanger. That's what most authors try to do and is the main reason for people to get that feeling of: "One more chapter!".
In any case, it was a nice read for the story
I think you might want to try to end chapters with foreshadowing to the next or by buildig tension, or a cliffhanger. That's what most authors try to do and is the main reason for people to get that feeling of: "One more chapter!".
