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Lost Crystals (Fiction) Chapter 1.3

May 5th 2006, 07:27 PM
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(Austin) How old are you?
(Ashley) 12, you?
(Austin) Same...
(Ashley) Cool...How did you buy those weapons? They must have cost alot and you shouldnt be allowed to have weapons!
(Austin) Well the weapon seller is my father and he doesnt care about me...And I have been saving up alot of money...
(Ashley) Oh...Wait we will need training before we can get the crystals back!
(Austin) Your right...Lets go to my uncles, he can teach us...
(20 minutes later...)
(Austin) Uncle we need training...
(Uncle Ben) Why? And who is she?
(Austin) Her name is Ashley and she is going to help me retrieve the crystals arcferdius just stole...We have weapons but we need training...
(Uncle Ben) Okay ill help you...
(So Uncle Ben trained them well, Austin was great with the pistols and Ashley was also great with the scimatar...)
(Austin) We are ready, lets go Ashley!
(Ashley) Yeah!
May 5th 2006, 08:20 PM
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They may seem young but its my story and they can be whatever age i want them to be!
May 9th 2006, 08:13 PM
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Chrispy
Peasant He/Him Canada
I'm a man, but I can change, if I have to.I guess. 
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