Victim of Life
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Okay, this was *cough*cough interesting *cough*cough.
Dink goes to save is friend "per" after some random guy barges into the house, grabs "per" and disappears. Funny, the guy doesn't move from the doorway.
STORY: 3 of 10
1)Lots of freakin' grammar errors. At least capitalize your letters. (-5)
2)Second, what kinda name is "per"? Who the heck names their kid "per"? I would feel sorry for that kid... after I got done laughing. Couldn't it have been "Joe", or "Bob"? Guess not... (-2)
MAP: 5 of 10
3) A lot of the screens were empty. 2 3x5 tile sections were barren. (-2)
4) Hardness errors galore! (-2)
5) On the screen where you have to kill the knight, he reappears if you exit and reenter the screen. (-1)
MUSIC: 2 of 10
6) WHAT KINDA MUSIC WAS THAT? I really hope that's not what you listen to in your spare time! (-8)
GRAPHICS: 4 of 10
7) Learn to type in a straight line. Your title screen needs work. (-4)
8) And, I'm sorry if you're colorblind, but the background is black, not red. (-2)
Score out of 10: 2.857
Now, that was pretty good for a D-MOD made by a first-timer (or second) thrown together in 2 hours. But, next time, PICK A BETTER FREAKIN' NAME!
Dink goes to save is friend "per" after some random guy barges into the house, grabs "per" and disappears. Funny, the guy doesn't move from the doorway.
STORY: 3 of 10
1)Lots of freakin' grammar errors. At least capitalize your letters. (-5)
2)Second, what kinda name is "per"? Who the heck names their kid "per"? I would feel sorry for that kid... after I got done laughing. Couldn't it have been "Joe", or "Bob"? Guess not... (-2)
MAP: 5 of 10
3) A lot of the screens were empty. 2 3x5 tile sections were barren. (-2)
4) Hardness errors galore! (-2)
5) On the screen where you have to kill the knight, he reappears if you exit and reenter the screen. (-1)
MUSIC: 2 of 10
6) WHAT KINDA MUSIC WAS THAT? I really hope that's not what you listen to in your spare time! (-8)
GRAPHICS: 4 of 10
7) Learn to type in a straight line. Your title screen needs work. (-4)
8) And, I'm sorry if you're colorblind, but the background is black, not red. (-2)
Score out of 10: 2.857
Now, that was pretty good for a D-MOD made by a first-timer (or second) thrown together in 2 hours. But, next time, PICK A BETTER FREAKIN' NAME!
